A BOOK FULL OF ROOMS Reviewed By Jean Roberta
The Reunion (Marketplace, Book 5) by Laura Antoniou
(Fairfield, Connecticut: Mystic Rose Books, 2002.
ISBN: 0-9645960-7-5.)
This novel, at 634 pages, is a large, elaborate
structure like the Irish castle (turned into a hotel)
in which it takes place. The plot is a moment-by-moment
account of a ten-day event sponsored by an international
organization, introduced by the author in her novel
The Marketplace, that trains and sells voluntary slaves.
A reunion, a Marketplace tradition, is a social event
for past and current slaves who are served by others
for a change. The guests of honor are temporarily
free to rest, enjoy the local sights, form relationships
and renew old ones.
This novel could have been a series of interconnected
stories like The Academy, Book 4 of the Marketplace
series. However, The Reunion is more intricately knit
together. While it is partly a series of anecdotes
including sex scenes, it is also partly a whodunit.
Two subplots which run through the novel serve to
sustain suspense, which mimics sexual tension. One
of these plots has to do with a charismatic English
lord and his beautiful, computer-savvy American wife,
who appear to be mavericks among Marketplace trainers.
Or are they? Their game is not revealed until the
end of the novel. Even then, they keep a few cards
up their sleeves.
The other subplot has to do with the voyeurism of
the gutter press, which contrasts with the loyalty
and discretion of the Marketplace slaves who are being
stalked by a tabloid journalist. The mysterious identity
of his "inside source" (disgruntled slave trainee?
rebel trainer? appalled or greedy witness?) is revealed
in a dramatic reversal of roles in which the spies
are unmasked. The weasel on the trail of an "exclusive"
proves to be less honest and more pathetic than the
"perverts" he hopes to expose. The intrusion of the
outside world into the secretive world of the Marketplace
invites the reader to consider cases of exposure,
harassment and legal persecution which have affected
the BDSM community in the actual world.
Two major characters from the earlier novels, slave
Robin Cassidy and her trainer, Chris Parker, who is
drawn to service on various levels, are stars of The
Reunion. Their personal attraction to each other (as
distinct from their attraction to dominance and submission)
blossoms in a "vacation" setting, but they are temporarily
pulled apart by misunderstandings, by the unfolding
subplots, and by the needs of the other characters,
all of whom star in their own dramas.
Like the other novels in the series, this one seems
to include every possible sexual orientation, and
a scene for every taste. The cast of characters is
so long that it is listed at the beginning of the
novel, as in a play. The diversity of the characters
and the complexity of events are described in a spare,
straightforward style. One technique used to unify
the narrative is the uncanny repetition of words (sometimes
in dialogue) from one scene to the next.
This suggestion of central planning or directing
behind the scenes is as close as the author comes
to showing a narrative persona. The generally understated
third-person style embodies the qualities that traditional
Marketplace trainers try to instill in their trainees:
patience, self-control, efficiency, and an ability
to glide in and out of rooms without attracting attention.
A few grammatical errors pop up regularly, like mildly
annoying habits, but they hardly interrupt the storytelling.
In a book of this size, it seems rare not to find
a wasted word.
One little stylistic affectation is the heading
at the beginning of each section of the novel (covering
a day of the Reunion). These mini-introductions remind
the reader of similar headings in long, realistic
Victorian novels, written in a time when reading-matter
did not have to compete with movies, television or
the Internet. The section headings in The Reunion
tease the reader by summarizing the plot, as follows:
"Day Eight - Thursday -- Amy has a plan ~ Farewells
and more plans ~ Robin is sneaky ~ Amy has a new friend
~ Mackensie finds she and Trevor have something in
common ~ Ryan assumes a philosophical attitude ~ Tequila's
radar ~ Azziz is perturbed ~ Ryan needs to think some
more ~ Pandemonium reigns ~ Vital decisions are made
~ It all comes together ~ It all falls apart ~ Night
brings quiet, sadness, pleasure and visitors ~ Chris
reveals his theory ~ Lord Southerby deals ~ Azziz
gets an offer he should probably accept ~ A craik
in the Oubliette ~ Do not cross the Irish Tourism
Board."
The atmosphere of the castle itself, complete with
trainee slaves "below stairs," further contrasts Victorian
tradition and modern explicitness. This contrast is
especially clear in the sex scenes. In a kind of grand-finale
scene, Robin is bound and whipped in a luxurious room
by three trainers who admire her. Her reactions are
described at length:
"Soon, the pain locked between her thighs became
razor sharp, sheets of heat which exploded in a new
branding sensation with every new whistling strike.
She tried desperately to hold still, and was both
ashamed and excited by her inability to do so. What
seemed like the last part of her rational brain rejoiced.
I'm not jaded. I'm not spoiled, not ruined, not over
it all. Yes, yes, draw in the pain and surrender to
it.
"She closed her eyes, and felt a strange sensation
of being lifted out of her bonds, all the strains
gone, the minor itches, the tension in her arms and
calves, all vanishing, supplanted by the rhythmic
cycles of pain, sharp and stinging, warm and glowing.
Colors exploded before her tightly closed eyes, red
and gold."
Robin is praised by her tormentors for having an
unusual depth of responsiveness. All the characters
in the novel, however, have depth as well as heat.
The sixth Marketplace novel is already being written,
and the series shows no signs of slowing down. Although
the author herself seems to have no hope of seeing
her work on a screen, the world of the Marketplace
has a kind of cult following which is parallel to
that of Tolkien's Lord of the Rings trilogy in the
1960s, which (for different reasons) was also considered
unfilmable at the time. So stay tuned; time will tell.
In the meanwhile, the novels make stimulating reading,
and their subtle grey covers, featuring pictures of
buildings like souvenir postcards, make them easier
to carry discreetly in public than, say, the latest
issue of Prometheus. Once you begin reading, it's
hard to stop.